BLK feedback

Please keep up with your Stage 1 posting Bisma - you need to show how the project is developing from your own perspective.

No evidence for this so far on this blog. Try to avoid long-ish gaps between posts.Please see the main blog posts for advice on how to proceed with your individual blog if you're not sure what you should be doing.

Your evaluation and continuity sequence link? What's going on?

BLK feedback

Bisma! Where is the link to my blog?? Please add this now!!

BLK feedback

Excellent analysis and reflections on your horror shot Bisma. Aim to be a little more technical though - start by identifying the shot distance you chose (and why) and mention a key feature like frame within a frame straight away. You will build up skill with this as you do more analysis.

Your choice of film clip is inspired, and your analysis here is very technical! So well done. Your research is really coming on too.

Can you add a link to my foundation blog, also to a couple of external film websites as well?

Great work so far.

THR feedback

Hi Bisma, I'm sorry if you lost a link but I had to upgrade your template so it could work properly with our whole blog - I tried to pick one as close to yours as possible I just think you lost a couple of links?

Anyway, your analysis is great - clear and detailed on both technical codes and on analysing and proposing possible meanings - A great start - well done!